tell me if you like my poem

[triste_lonely_gurl08]

What Do You Do?

What do you do,
When you love him,
You gave everything,
And then he questions your love?

What do you do,
When you both know
What is wrong,
And he tells you he needs space
To think about it some more?

What do you do
When you know you
Have to give him time
To think about what is on his mind?

What do you do
When you lay in bed
Thinking of his decision
Afraid of what his answer will be?

What do you do
When you are scared
Of losing the one you
Have loved the most?

What do you do
When your thoughts
Become negative
This love will no longer work out?

What do you do
When you lay there
Remember the good times
And thinking, trying to figure out
What he’s thinking at the exact moment?

What to you do
When you know it’s for the best
But cannot let it happen,
You think he is the one
You know it in your heart and soul
But you don’t ever want him to leave?

What do you do
When you know he has changed
You and what you thought love was about?

What do you do
When he knows you have changed him too,
He doesn’t want to get into trouble
He needs to see you and talk to you.

This is me,
These are my thoughts
As I lay in bed
Thinking of him
Waiting for what he has to tell me
Of what this thoughts will be.
I am afraid of his answer is what I don’t want to know.

But I have to face reality,
Somehow,
I guess… :tears:

[lilcrzy1]

your thoughts are mine the same,i like it good poem...

[triste_lonely_gurl08]

thanks gurl..

[Sad_ClownX3]

What Do You Do?

What do you do,
When you love him,
You gave everything,
And then he questions your love?

What do you do,
When you both know
What is wrong,
And he tells you he needs space
To think about it some more?

What do you do
When you know you
Have to give him time
To think about what is on his mind?

What do you do
When you lay in bed
Thinking of his decision
Afraid of what his answer will be?

What do you do
When you are scared
Of losing the one you
Have loved the most?

What do you do
When your thoughts
Become negative
This love will no longer work out?

What do you do
When you lay there
Remember the good times
And thinking, trying to figure out
What he’s thinking at the exact moment?

What to you do
When you know it’s for the best
But cannot let it happen,
You think he is the one
You know it in your heart and soul
But you don’t ever want him to leave?

What do you do
When you know he has changed
You and what you thought love was about?

What do you do
When he knows you have changed him too,
He doesn’t want to get into trouble
He needs to see you and talk to you.

This is me,
These are my thoughts
As I lay in bed
Thinking of him
Waiting for what he has to tell me
Of what this thoughts will be.
I am afraid of his answer is what I don’t want to know.

But I have to face reality,
Somehow,
I guess… :tears:

:tears: DAM ESA PUES U HIT IT...I KNOW THE FEELIN EY...I WAS LIKE THAT FOR THE PAST MONTH AND APENAS ANOCHE IT HIT ME ACROSS THE FACE!!! MY MAN ME DEJO...DAMz AND I DONT KNOW WTF TO DO!!! LO AMO CON TODO MI CORAZON...WE HAD SO MANY PLANz AND SHIET Y AHORA... IM LOST...ME QUEDE SOLA...(*tearz of a sad clown*)

[triste_lonely_gurl08]

aww dont cry....i wrote it cuz my man and i are thinkin of breakin up....i havent talked to him in 4days.... :tears: ..i dont wanna lose him so :fingerscr :pray:

[brownchicaangel]

yeah i like this poem.yeah i have been there before.it suckz but tht life

[triste_lonely_gurl08]

thank you...and yea it does suck...im still waiting for what my man has to say...

[brownchicaangel]

well gurl i hope itz good

[triste_lonely_gurl08]

yea me too..cuz i dont wanna lose him, ive been wit him for almost 11months now...so idk...

[brownchicaangel]

damn gurl well i hope the best 4 u.but wat happnez, happenz u knw. watever happenz,it was meant 2 be like tht u knw.

[triste_lonely_gurl08]

yea i know what youre saying...i got to talk to him after 5days of not talkin..and we both said that we love each other and wanna work things out...so me and him are still together!!!!.....im so happy...thnx ppl for telling me to keep my head up cuz some times i cant.....

[Luv in Dolor=,[]

What Do You Do?

What do you do,
When you love him,
You gave everything,
And then he questions your love?

What do you do,
When you both know
What is wrong,
And he tells you he needs space
To think about it some more?

What do you do
When you know you
Have to give him time
To think about what is on his mind?

What do you do
When you lay in bed
Thinking of his decision
Afraid of what his answer will be?

What do you do
When you are scared
Of losing the one you
Have loved the most?

What do you do
When your thoughts
Become negative
This love will no longer work out?

What do you do
When you lay there
Remember the good times
And thinking, trying to figure out
What he’s thinking at the exact moment?

What to you do
When you know it’s for the best
But cannot let it happen,
You think he is the one
You know it in your heart and soul
But you don’t ever want him to leave?

What do you do
When you know he has changed
You and what you thought love was about?

What do you do
When he knows you have changed him too,
He doesn’t want to get into trouble
He needs to see you and talk to you.

This is me,
These are my thoughts
As I lay in bed
Thinking of him
Waiting for what he has to tell me
Of what this thoughts will be.
I am afraid of his answer is what I don’t want to know.

But I have to face reality,
Somehow,
I guess… :tears:
eso wut u hav wrote has happened 2me a lot i hav a good relationship but i was da1 tell n em bout spade +im preg de el my parents dont kno lo amo pero i just think wut would happen if dis...he 4 years older but loseing em will b fucked 4 da bebe im 2months hit me up

[brownchicaangel]

yea i know what youre saying...i got to talk to him after 5days of not talkin..and we both said that we love each other and wanna work things out...so me and him are still together!!!!.....im so happy...thnx ppl for telling me to keep my head up cuz some times i cant.....

yeah gurl im happy 4 u.i wish i could have said tht but i cnt.even though i dnt really knw u but i will be here 4 u gurl.u have my support.

[triste_lonely_gurl08]

yeah gurl im happy 4 u.i wish i could have said tht but i cnt.even though i dnt really knw u but i will be here 4 u gurl.u have my support.

aww thnx gurl...and even though i dont really know you either...i am here for you too...lol... :hug: :luxlove: :flowerz: :hand:

[ELiDa]

Hey that was a real interesting poem and i understand the feeling

[triste_lonely_gurl08]

thank you for your reply and im glad that you liked it....

[brownchicaangel]

aww thnx gurl...and even though i dont really know you either...i am here for you too...lol... :hug: :luxlove: :flowerz: :hand:

:luxlove: yeah urwelcome gurl.but im happy 4 u and ur man.i hope u teo last a long time gurl cuz now dayz itz hard 2 find a good guy. :fingerscr

[triste_lonely_gurl08]

yuup that is true...but you cant give up hope you know..and im happy that i have my boo cuz we have been together for 11 1/2 months, its our long relationship to both of us...and me and him are still goin strong...

[brownchicaangel]

yuup that is true...but you cant give up hope you know..and im happy that i have my boo cuz we have been together for 11 1/2 months, its our long relationship to both of us...and me and him are still goin strong...

im not giving up hope.itz just tht i dnt want no drama wth guyz cuz i have a enough on mind as it is u knw.i mean i met this guy and he knwz watz up wth me.he said he would be there 4 me and shit if we got 2gether.but i dnt knw.we will have 2 see wat happenz

[triste_lonely_gurl08]

oh okiez...i get you now..lol...yea thats true...cuz some guys like to gang up on us women..lol...and i have a guy like that too..just make sure he is tru....stay up and trust him gurl...

[brownchicaangel]

oh okiez...i get you now..lol...yea thats true...cuz some guys like to gang up on us women..lol...and i have a guy like that too..just make sure he is tru....stay up and trust him gurl...

yeah gurl of course.i knw hez true but i have dayz were i say fuck it and i dnt trust him.and yeah gurl some guyz do like 2 gang up on us but revenge is a bitch. :biggrin: but i dnt knw wat 2 gurl.wat do u think i should do?i need ur help gurl

[triste_lonely_gurl08]

dont be like fuck it...cuz thats how my boo used to be a few months ago..if he really likes you then he will be like fuck it too...dont do that...cuz thats how i was, and i thought that he didnt wana be with me no more....you have to learn how to really really trust one another...and see what happens from there.....much love

[brownchicaangel]

dont be like fuck it...cuz thats how my boo used to be a few months ago..if he really likes you then he will be like fuck it too...dont do that...cuz thats how i was, and i thought that he didnt wana be with me no more....you have to learn how to really really trust one another...and see what happens from there.....much love

yeah gurl thatz true.but itz hard 2 trust a guy when in the past a lot of guyz have cheated on u.u knw.i knw hez diff but i just need time 2 get 2 knw him a lil better.well gurl i hope u and ur boo last long gurl.cuz guyz now these dayz?sshit there aint that many good onez now.thankz gurl. :luxlove:

[triste_lonely_gurl08]

yea thats how i am...but me and my boo talked for like a month before getting together....and he has made me feel so special..lol...but yea get to know him better....aww thanks i hope me and him last a long time too...and ur welcome

[brownchicaangel]

yea thats how i am...but me and my boo talked for like a month before getting together....and he has made me feel so special..lol...but yea get to know him better....aww thanks i hope me and him last a long time too...and ur welcome

sshit once i talked 2 a guy 4 maybe 3 monthz before hooking up.and thatz good gurl that he makes u feel special.most guys are 2 big 2 do that u knw.but that there thing u knw.well gurl lol thankz once again 4 having my back. :heart:

[triste_lonely_gurl08]

lol...just give him time to get to know you more and vise versa..you know...and no problem...you gotz my back..lol

[brownchicaangel]

lol...just give him time to get to know you more and vise versa..you know...and no problem...you gotz my back..lol

lol thankz gurl once again. :luxlove: and hey gurl i saw some og ur poemz on brownpride.u have some good onez gurl.post some cuz shit i knw u have some lol.4realz though gurl

[triste_lonely_gurl08]

lol...you on that site too....well hit me up sometime on there...and of course i got more poems...just not any new ones yet...lol...thankz again too...lol

[brownchicaangel]

lol...you on that site too....well hit me up sometime on there...and of course i got more poems...just not any new ones yet...lol...thankz again too...lol

lol gurl.not 2 be nasty but i rec u cuz of ur pic of ur ass.lol not 2 nasty.lol 4realz though.i aint a memember there cuz it wont let me?i dnt knw :tears:

[triste_lonely_gurl08]

lol....its all good...you know you want it....lmao..im jp gurl...and you should keep trying...

[brownchicaangel]

lol....its all good...you know you want it....lmao..im jp gurl...and you should keep trying...

lol no im good gurl.i will stike 2 my dick lol.u got me tlking nasty up in hurr gurl.lol j/k and yeah im a memember of it now.im a memember on sychicano.com 2.well gurl laterz cuz i knw u got school later.hit me up gurl.

[triste_lonely_gurl08]

lol no im good gurl.i will stike 2 my dick lol.u got me tlking nasty up in hurr gurl.lol j/k and yeah im a memember of it now.im a memember on sychicano.com 2.well gurl laterz cuz i knw u got school later.hit me up gurl.

lmao...im just playin gurl...you under the same id?....well i have to go to skoo too.....later

[brownchicaangel]

lmao...im just playin gurl...you under the same id?....well i have to go to skoo too.....later

naw itz a diff name.gurl idnt have school til this firday.

[triste_lonely_gurl08]

Oh Ok..lolz....well Your The Lucky Duck...lol

[brownchicaangel]

Oh Ok..lolz....well Your The Lucky Duck...lol

lol . :laughing: yeah i knw gurl lol have fun at school later.

[triste_lonely_gurl08]

lol...its fun, just cuz i get to see my friends from last yr..lol

[brownchicaangel]

lol...its fun, just cuz i get to see my friends from last yr..lol

thtz good gurl :biggrin:

[triste_lonely_gurl08]

yea...but i got some bad news today, my dad was supposed be getting outta jail tomorrow but they fucked it up and he has to be in there 40 more days (hes been in there since april, cuz of his 4th dui last yr)....damn i was really happy that he would finally be out...i dont know what to do... :tears: :tears: :tears:

[brownchicaangel]

yea...but i got some bad news today, my dad was supposed be getting outta jail tomorrow but they fucked it up and he has to be in there 40 more days (hes been in there since april, cuz of his 4th dui last yr)....damn i was really happy that he would finally be out...i dont know what to do... :tears: :tears: :tears:

damn gurl im sorry.well gurl i dnt have a dad.just a mom.well gurl everything happenz 4 a reason u knw.better later than never gurl.again sorry it took my awhile 2 get back at u.

[triste_lonely_gurl08]

its okay, if i made it this far than i can be stronger now right?....i have to be strong for him....but thnx and its all good gurl..lol

[brownchicaangel]

its okay, if i made it this far than i can be stronger now right?....i have to be strong for him....but thnx and its all good gurl..lol

yeah gurl u have 2 be.no matter wat u have 2 be strong.howz school gurl?

[triste_lonely_gurl08]

yeah gurl u have 2 be.no matter wat u have 2 be strong.howz school gurl?

you i know....i have been strong this long.....skoo is doing good, the first week went fast..lol...

[brownchicaangel]

you i know....i have been strong this long.....skoo is doing good, the first week went fast..lol...

sshit gurl the first week 4 me went by fast.the first week on school i only went three dayz last week.lol it was great but now fuck it.itz all over now.5 dayz a week now.that suckz some nutz lol

[triste_lonely_gurl08]

lolz.....i have a 4day week this week..so im all happy..lol...

[brownchicaangel]

lolz.....i have a 4day week this week..so im all happy..lol...

damn gurl u suck lol 4realz though

[triste_lonely_gurl08]

lolz....ha ha.....naww im jp